Lonely Girl

by Kirsty   Jun 9, 2008


"Guys come and go", well at least thats what I'm told,
Yet it doesn't make it any easier being on my own.
If i could just have one wish tonight
it would be to have someone special by my side,
i need to feel some love
cos being on my own just ain't enough.

I'm a lonely girl, and i hide it beneath my smile,
nothing in my life seems worthwhile
without someone to share it.
I want someone to share my secrets with
to take me as his bride, and be the father to my kids
I'm a lonely girl, but i think i deserve this.

I wont give up!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Ilike this poem as it offers up a female perscpetive on my thoughts.

    "Guys come and go", well at least thats what I'm told,
    Yet it doesn't make it any easier being on my own.

    There are some flow issues which could be easily rememdied.

    "Guys come and go",
    well at least thats what I'm told,
    Yet it doesn't make it any easier,
    being on my own.

    That is an idea, just thought I would offer up some suggestions on how to improve your flow. I like the messages that you send, but they seem to have a dark undertone to them :(.

    There is someone out there for you. I have never been so sure in my entirely life of that as I have been the past two weeks.

    5/5

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