Twist

by ForbiddenSnowflake   Jun 9, 2008


Twist and turn, twirl and tuck,
Turn when twist, tuck after twirl,
Twist whilst turn and twirl before tuck,
Now repeat the twist, turn, twirl, tuck, GOOD LUCK!

I know this isn't very good but it is my first ever attempt at a tongue twister (and most probably my last lol). Definitely not my forte but thought it would be fun to have a go :-)

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  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Hey i thought it wasn"t bad ^^
    lol i'd probably wouldn't do as well
    O_o" ack
    was hard to say lol

  • 16 years ago

    by 2weak2smile

    JKS it good

    (For a first go)

    Keep writing :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by 2weak2smile

    JKS it good

    (For a first go)

    Keep writing :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by David ODonnell

    I tell you something although it maybe your your first, I sure as hell had a hard time trying to say it. Good stuff!

  • 16 years ago

    by ForbiddenSnowflake

    Give me a break Ive never done this before lol. I dont really know how to write one i just thought id have a go

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