by ForbiddenSnowflake Jun 9, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
Close your eyes and block out the world around, |
by Purple
Good poem, love the message. It was very smooth, and kept my attention. :D Thanks for the good read. 4/5 |
by Sarah
Nice poem ... well written & beautifully penned 5/5 |
by Sourav
Well written... It can inspire some... Interesting to read! |
by 2weak2smile
Very well written, I know exactly where your coming from. |
I think we can all relate to this poem with the inner voice, maybe holding the knife is affective as pointing the finger or speaking direct. You write really well! 5/5 |