I think we can all relate to this poem with the inner voice, maybe holding the knife is affective as pointing the finger or speaking direct. You write really well! 5/5

Very well written, I know exactly where your coming from.

Well written... It can inspire some... Interesting to read!

Nice poem ... well written & beautifully penned 5/5

Good poem, love the message. It was very smooth, and kept my attention. :D Thanks for the good read. 4/5

Structure of the poem could be more properly formatted, but it was certainly well planed out well.