Dreams Crash Down (592)

by NinjaGirl   Jun 9, 2008


Dreams Crash Down

Do you feel the weight of the world
Slowly bringing you down?
Do you feel the weight of love
Quietly tugging at your frown?

Do you hear the waves crashing
Always around your feet?
Do you hear the drums grow louder
As they come to meet?

Do you smell that lovely smell
Of his lynx perfume?
Do you smell the quiet smell
Of your coming doom?

Do you taste the cherries
As they blossom on the wind?
Do you taste the peaches
On his lips, a hint?

Do you see his eyes darken
As he realises the sin committed?
Do you see your dreams crash down
As your future is rewritten?

Written 9 June 2008

~Dedicated to Daimon~

©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow love how you ended it, your description was great and seriously i loved your last stanza it was a great fit to your poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    Daimon needs to read your poems, this poem is another example of how much you love him.
    5/5

    Cheers xo