Sweet bitterness and fear! What an ending!!

Your work is always so deep and profound! A poem debating heaven and hell. Anything this bad must be hell, right? So, if there is a hell, then heaven must exsits to balance the universe!

A poem with a moral, I loved it!!

Well done

Michael

I really like all of your poems.
I've seen your entries in the contest forums.
I love your word choice.

Wow, another excellent and deep poem. this poem also drew me in completely.

"Morning comes, but night shall fall,
Then shadows haunt this earth,
Tainting all that's ever lived,
Weakening our worth."

that was probably my favorite stanza.

very good job.