Memory

by Tori   Jun 9, 2008


He is a memory burned within my soul
When I talk to him my heart seems whole,
For that simple minute, hour or day
All my worries and wondering go away.
I think happy thoughts of him and me,
I think of what could happen, what we could be.
Then I remember he's going out with someone.
And then my fairytale is over with and done.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was a very strong emotional piece. I think you expressed your feelings well. Keep it up hun. Nik :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Excellent! Loved the rhyme...

  • 16 years ago

    by MR F R 3 S H

    Wow that's a sad ending but I really lyked it 5/5.....eventually hell see wat he's missing

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Girl an idea : split it into 2 paragraoh it is more readable that way

    second
    it si one fabiolus poem short , great expression and much easy to understand and it have rhyming@@!!!!:)

    great 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Adam RIP Lesthat and Cody Hayden

    This was an excellent poem that expressed all your emotions when you wrote it. great job.5/5
    **lesthat

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