The best religious poem I have read in a long time, awesome work, good pacing, good choice of words, good job

your servant:
David J

Such a nice poem..... great work

Fantastic really. ur word choice seems to always flow,
i have loved how you titled it and explained why ur work is wroth it by how u wrote it.

let me tell u ..this was my fav

Yet truth has a way of lighting the right path
Leading to the salvation of escaping the wrath
Of addictions, and the other senseless self harms
To lead you on the straight road to loving arms

esp the last line of this stanza.

you are one of the poets Im honored to read their work
5/5