Until next time

by she   Jun 9, 2008


Slide the blade
Watch my blood run scarlet

Watch it pour
So beautifully flow
From my wrist
To the bathroom floor

Feel the blood
Feel the high
Feel my pain slowly die

From the door comes a knock
Put my friend away
Until next time

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  • 16 years ago

    by CHEMICALcaitlin

    I liked the flow of this, and it went together really well. there was a lot of imagery and i could picture it all. It was so sad, with so much feeling behind it. once again really proved you have talent. 5/5 =)

  • 16 years ago

    by 2weak2smile

    The poem flows very well, very well writen.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    I think this poem is written very nicely. Liked the flow of it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Very sad, with so much feeling...5/5

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