Very sad, with so much feeling...5/5

I think this poem is written very nicely. Liked the flow of it.

The poem flows very well, very well writen.

5/5

I liked the flow of this, and it went together really well. there was a lot of imagery and i could picture it all. It was so sad, with so much feeling behind it. once again really proved you have talent. 5/5 =)