That Boy

by Mallory   Jun 9, 2008


I like that one boy,
what a joy.
I wasn't sure a first,
now my heart might burst.

I didn't know him,
the one class we had was gym.
The party made me sure.
Now I think there is no cure.

His sky blue eyes
light up the night sky.
When he talks to me,
I feel so free.
He is so fine
He is mine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Great job... this is so touching... and i like the stanzas... i really have nothing bad to say... this is very good... your title is eye catching simple but it makes you wonder... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "I like that one boy,
    what a joy.
    I wasn't sure a first,
    now my heart might burst."
    -"I wasn't sure AT first."

    Perfect. I think it was pretty good. Your emotions came out and were clear for me to see. You truely like this guy :) It was a sweet hearfelt poem. :] Keep writing, keep improving. 5/5.

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