"I like that one boy,
what a joy.
I wasn't sure a first,
now my heart might burst."
-"I wasn't sure AT first."

Perfect. I think it was pretty good. Your emotions came out and were clear for me to see. You truely like this guy :) It was a sweet hearfelt poem. :] Keep writing, keep improving. 5/5.

Great job... this is so touching... and i like the stanzas... i really have nothing bad to say... this is very good... your title is eye catching simple but it makes you wonder... 5/5