Wow, your use of words was beautiful!! u created amazing visuals that made me think kind of a fairytale world where all you see is true beauty!! I loved it, well done!! it was truly amazing!!

Beautiful, oh so Beautiful. Very visually colorful.Love it!

This poem was a bit tricky for me cuz of the metaphors,but still I liked it.Brilliant imagery though.Loved these lines a lot.............

And my spirit soars

And I discover what a little man I actually am
So if these supple hands and gentle spirit
Can touch your life and maybe, just maybe, change the colour in your eyes
For just one second, and help you see what I have seen
I will die a peaceful man

Can actually feel the emotions here.Very very nice indeed.Thumbs up to you too!

Grant, my friend i know that it truly takes strength to find a peace such as this. Instead of being caught up in all that opposes it in life.
Truly words of inspiration thank you 5/5

WOW!! Another well written poem of yours Grant!!! I liked it VERY MUCH!!! I think I just might take your advice on writing a free verse poem as well. I must admit though...I STILL LOVED reading the poem of yours "YOU TOUCHED ME". That is by far the best of your poems that I have read thus far.

I thank you for all of the wonderful comment you wrote to me regarding some of my poems. I appreciate all the comments and feel free to give me some advice of how I could improve (if any). I welcome all of your comments.

Karla~ (USA-TEXAS).....smiles!!

Very moving.. You have a very creative flare, Grant.. "artsy" if you don't mind me saying.