Our Loving Savior

by Poet on the Piano   Jun 9, 2008


Born in a stable with animals,
But still as holy as could be,
Everyone thought he was nothing,
Just a low and poor person.

Nobody knew he was the Messiah,
The Chosen One from the Father,
No one knew who he really was,
That he came to save the world.

Preaching and teaching,
Was what he always did,
Building God's kingdom,
To its highest point ever.

He came to fulfill the law,
And to help all of the earth,
He came for the whole universe,
Not just for the rich, but for the poor.

So he preformed many miracles,
And healed the sick and dying,
He made the dead come to life,
And blessed all those in need.

Such a perfect example to us,
What a holy and faithful man,
He cares so much for everyone,
A loving father to us all.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xoxSwissCheesexox

    This is a great poem.
    Really awesome! You told it like you were there.

    xoxo
    -Samantha-

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    So cute and sweet and TRUE! Amen! I loved it!
    :)

    -Liz-

  • 16 years ago

    by Samantha

    I will say first of all I am not religious...so I'm perhaps not the right person to read this poem. I was impressed by the fact that technically this poem is superior to many others. I was slightly disappointed at the lack of form besides the separated, equal stanzas, because it seemed more like prose to me than poetry.

    All in all, I didn't see much to this poem that truly stood out, it was a generic rephrasing of events. Not to say that your writing is not good, it's simply not unique.

    But please don't get me wrong, I'm not saying anything bad. I'm simply the wrong person to read this type of poetry, I would say.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Ally Kat Xx In love xX

    I love this one!!! Its great!! Excellent work!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Great poem i really enjoyed reading this. It was so beautifully written. Keep it up.
    5/5

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