Great poem i really enjoyed reading this. It was so beautifully written. Keep it up.
5/5

I love this one!!! Its great!! Excellent work!!!

I will say first of all I am not religious...so I'm perhaps not the right person to read this poem. I was impressed by the fact that technically this poem is superior to many others. I was slightly disappointed at the lack of form besides the separated, equal stanzas, because it seemed more like prose to me than poetry.

All in all, I didn't see much to this poem that truly stood out, it was a generic rephrasing of events. Not to say that your writing is not good, it's simply not unique.

But please don't get me wrong, I'm not saying anything bad. I'm simply the wrong person to read this type of poetry, I would say.

So cute and sweet and TRUE! Amen! I loved it!
:)

-Liz-

This is a great poem.
Really awesome! You told it like you were there.

xoxo
-Samantha-