Great poem, very to the point. Beautifully penned. Really liked the way you started each one off with the ending of the other.

That was great!!! it was simple but wonderful!! 5/5

It's simple but amazing...I rlly liked it...

Wow! take a vow, girl! that was great! it rhymed and it made sense. i know how you feel! loved the poem, girl. keep writing. you have great talent!

Can so relate!! love it! ~KM~

OMG..i love this one, too!!..good job!
5/5...