Life

by Mallory   Jun 9, 2008


Life is crazy
its can have twists and turns
it can be lazy
it can be a time to learn.
Why is it so hard
when does it get easy?
When you get a credit card?
Not when you get queezy.
Thats life
it isn't always fun.
Don't grabb a knife
or a gun.
Live by this statement
Live Your Life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful... simple and straight... with a wonderful meaning attached to it...

    good write..
    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    I love it... your flow is great, and your almost having a conversation with the reader... very good... i see alot of improvment here... still think about stanzas... it took me awhile to write in stanzas but i've found it helps with the flow of the poem alot...

    when does it get easy?
    When you get a credit card?
    Not when you get queezy.

    ^^ i love this part... very very good... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Thats life as this poem points out with good advice at its end

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "Don't grabb a knife."
    -grab.

    Overall, the poem was true all in all. It was a true poem about what life entails. Um, however. I think at times the rhyming was a bit forced. But, I like the whole idea of this poem and the length was good, but I think you could add more descriptive words. 3/5.

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