"Don't grabb a knife."
-grab.

Overall, the poem was true all in all. It was a true poem about what life entails. Um, however. I think at times the rhyming was a bit forced. But, I like the whole idea of this poem and the length was good, but I think you could add more descriptive words. 3/5.

Thats life as this poem points out with good advice at its end

I love it... your flow is great, and your almost having a conversation with the reader... very good... i see alot of improvment here... still think about stanzas... it took me awhile to write in stanzas but i've found it helps with the flow of the poem alot...

when does it get easy?
When you get a credit card?
Not when you get queezy.

^^ i love this part... very very good... 5/5

Beautiful... simple and straight... with a wonderful meaning attached to it...

good write..
keep writing..