I like it the poem as a nice feel to it 's rhyme and I really like that oh and in the line "you just done seem to care." I think you meant don't just a heads up so you can fix it besides that AMAZING!!!

Really good poem!
very well written with a goos set of repitition + the ending just makes the poem perfect!

"love is ruthless and cruel, i wish you would understand."

5.5 :)!

Losing a beloved one is never easy...but it feels good to write about it doesn't it?
It has been such a long time since last you posted!
Welcome back to the site!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid