You're the one

by WiNgS Of StEeL   Jun 9, 2008


Finally free from all the pain
No longer does it exist
Ive found that i am sane
With your help and tender kiss.

No longer am i afraid
To go to bed at night.
With you by my side
There's nothing i cant fight.

You're everything I've ever wanted
You're more then i deserve.
I'll never take you for granted
I promise to always serve.

Please dont desert me darling
For i wont desert you.
For you're the one that i prayed for
You're the one i choose.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Hebe

    I like!

    Especially the third stanza:

    "You're everything I've ever wanted
    You're more then i deserve.
    I'll never take you for granted
    I promise to always serve."

    It's beautiful, and the emotion you put it feels real.

    5/5 Keep it up!
    Hebe

  • 15 years ago

    by Nomad Being

    Emotions displayed in the poem are beautiful...
    keep up!!! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Ur poem was nice..I liked it,keep it up:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A very endearing write! Now who could say no to such a plea?
    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by forevertobeart

    Awh, this is so sweet. perfect rhyming and flow, and you used just the right words to compliment the poem. really cute poem, and whoever this was to is lucky. ;)

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