I find this poem is written very well. Very nicely structured and has a good flow. Good work on this one!

The rhyming was done well it didnt't seem forced at all! =]
It had a good point and seemed real.
Nice one

Awh, this is so sweet. perfect rhyming and flow, and you used just the right words to compliment the poem. really cute poem, and whoever this was to is lucky. ;)

A very endearing write! Now who could say no to such a plea?
Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Ur poem was nice..I liked it,keep it up:)

Emotions displayed in the poem are beautiful...
keep up!!! :)

I like!

Especially the third stanza:

"You're everything I've ever wanted
You're more then i deserve.
I'll never take you for granted
I promise to always serve."

It's beautiful, and the emotion you put it feels real.

5/5 Keep it up!
Hebe