My Last Date

by Aussie   Jun 9, 2008


She's dressed and blushed.
Now she's practicing talking to the mirror.
the date to be kissed,
is only 10 seconds away.

Ding, 8:30pm, running to the door's dinging.
Oh dear late, in traffic she will wait.
8:45pm, another date spend standing.
What happened?

he never made her stand,
like those before him.
he must be in a car rick, or never again stand.
she thinks he's not one of those.

she calls over again and again,
now 4.
she leaves another message again,
now 6.

you think she would have learned by now,
that boys don't care.
No more dating, for now.
too many tears waisted.

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. this piece is so sad. . But very nicely written. [5/5]

    `wasted -should be the way the last word is spelled. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    I'm sorry this happened to you and it shouldn't ass beautiful as a person u are...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    I like the ending :) the whole poem has a great deal of emotions and you let the reader know :) well don :)

  • 16 years ago

    by 2weak2smile

    Very good poem, i hope this doesnt happen all the time :-(

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww that sucks lol. Awesome poem the only problem was i think u meant wreck instead of rick? lol or maybe i'm wrong lol but great job anyway
    -vino

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