Very well written, and the message, perfectly clear hun. 5/5

-Liz-

ps: I loved the 4th stanza, 2nd line, the way that can be taken in two different ways. I'm not sure if you meant that, but I thought it was neat. :)

I like the way that you go in some of your poems stuff like "an eye for an eye"
what a great message that you sent?!!!!

i agree =]
nice job there