Murder

by HidinVictim   Jun 9, 2008


Blood dipped fingertips...
Crimson died nails
Artificial blood
In a bottle
No match for
The stains of
Her crime
She looks from
Her wrist to
his fist,
he's laying limp
Who knew
The razor he made
her turn to she would use
to justify her pain
he had made her
bleed for the
last time
now that he's gone
she'll be fine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Very intense.. and dark.. it was short and there wasnt much detail .. but overall i felt like i understood it.. and i liked how powerful it was.

    good job.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mallory

    Whoa. That was really good poem. Very intense. Yo used very descriptive details nice work! 5/5