Comments : Murder

  • 16 years ago

    by Mallory

    Whoa. That was really good poem. Very intense. Yo used very descriptive details nice work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Very intense.. and dark.. it was short and there wasnt much detail .. but overall i felt like i understood it.. and i liked how powerful it was.

    good job.5/5