by Mallory Jun 9, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Love is like the ocean |
by HidinVictim
I like it... but i must say i'd like it even more in stanzas.. |
Wow, I must say. This is your best poem yet. I honestly can say I'm impressed. This poem had a perfect flow. The rhyming wasn't forced, you didn't repeat yourself at all, and the whole meaning of the poem was amazing. I have a poem similar to this called.. "Life Is a RollerCoaster; Enjoy the Ride." Possibly, you'll consider checking it out. Back to your poem.. I think you've already improved you just don't realize it. :) Or maybe you do? This was amazing! The topic of love is so easy to write about. You captured the meaning of love here. Excellent work. I'm pleased to say, 5/5 :) |
All that is said in this cute free flowing poem is true about true love |
by Nobodys Hero
Short but sweet |