Comments : Love is

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Short but sweet
    Nice job

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    All that is said in this cute free flowing poem is true about true love
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow, I must say. This is your best poem yet. I honestly can say I'm impressed. This poem had a perfect flow. The rhyming wasn't forced, you didn't repeat yourself at all, and the whole meaning of the poem was amazing. I have a poem similar to this called.. "Life Is a RollerCoaster; Enjoy the Ride." Possibly, you'll consider checking it out. Back to your poem.. I think you've already improved you just don't realize it. :) Or maybe you do? This was amazing! The topic of love is so easy to write about. You captured the meaning of love here. Excellent work. I'm pleased to say, 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    I like it... but i must say i'd like it even more in stanzas..

    Love is like a movie
    it has a beginning, climax, and an end.
    Love is forever
    it doesn't just disappear in a second.

    ^^this doesn't make sence how can love have an ending like a movie, but still be forever... you might consider changing you last example <-- (for lack of a better word)

    still there is definatly some material here

    Love is a rollercoaster
    it goes up and down and all around

    ^^ like this for example i couldn't agree more... 4/5