That was beautifuly put.
And poems don't have to rhyme,
poems are just self expression, and you
did that very well. I love your poem and I can
really relate to it. I love every single word
you wrote, so fresh and real. Fantastic job,
I absalutly love it! 5/5!!!

-mandy

I'm sure many people would agree with you on this, however I do not.
Aside from personal differences, this is okay.
It is perhaps a little cliche. It strays a little to close to life is an adventure, when you say life is all about the unknown.
Also, I see this as being a little too literal, it's more of a journal entry than prose.
Still, some of the points you brushed upon are noteable. Hmm. I can't really think of much more to say about this, apologies.
4/5

jess ~