Comments : I Promise

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Wow...I really got so nice feelings from this poem.. Maybe because I am really falling in down deep down on my knees I specially because I am in romantic mood.

    It would be so ideal to go to a county like the one on the poem.. There would be no wars, no homelessness, no sadness, no wars because of religion.

    This is very lovely poem. Sweet thoughts.

    Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice poem. Please find that place. give also his address.

  • 16 years ago

    by gracey grey

    Omg Sourav! Just there where no one cries.......awesome opening line for a poem so genuinely heartfelt.One perfect line is what takes me away.Lovely, lovely and lovely!!!Thumbs up all the way.This one is DEFINITELY going to my favorites.Lemme go read it again.Looking forward to reading more.

    grace

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Wow...just wow is all i can say
    i really like this poem its just so beautiful and the flow was just perfect for this poem....u did a great job!!

    well done i give it a 5/5
    tk care
    bree

    please read and comment on some of my poems any one that catches ur fancy lol

    thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by Kevin Askew

    Great poem!! Wonderful use of words. Does that place exist? We can all live in hope, maybe one day....

    Kevin

  • 16 years ago

    by ~*LiL G0ldi3*~

    I love dis
    i can really relate to it

  • 16 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    Your poem is really touching and got so much emotions in it...if you find that place...please let me know where it is...

  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    Such a lovely peace. So sweet and sincere. I loved it.
    <3Raych

  • 16 years ago

    by Bettina

    Awwwwwww..hon this poem is really amazing...it really brought tears into my eyes..
    keep up the good work
    much luv
    betty

  • 16 years ago

    by niel

    The part "i promise i'll love you with all my rave"
    doesn't make sense, but other then that, well constructed rhyme scheme and pleasant imagery.

    Keep writing and reading!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lovely

    Its a touching poem and u expressed many emotions init. I could really fell the desire as you promise to love the person

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Love definitely knows no boundaries and you speak of that so well in this write. I loved the message of never ending love and come what may you will always be there.
    BTW thank you for the nice comment on my poem and sorry it has taken a while to read yours.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Our poems are somehow connected...The theme is actually almost the same...its like, I Promise I Love You, ((The Right KInd Of Wrong))..

    Where there is no cultural debate
    A place where no religions to hate
    People live life like as it is
    I promise I'll love you there
    Like an open breeze

    ^ Trust me these lines brought tears to my eyes..You have no idea how powerful these lines were.

    Just there where my brothers don't fight
    No war and no soldiers on either side
    No discriminations for any colour and race
    I'll be waiting for you there
    To see your angelic face

    ^ These touched my heart too..

    I simply love how you write..You have a very powerful message thru your poems..

    I was truly touched with the whole poem..

    Keep writing !!

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is really beautiful! Wow!