Wow!!! you're so optemistic, I have twin brothers and they're the best, but kids that's completly different and having to raise them on your own must be hard... I hope the best for you.

Verry good!

The brutal honesty in this poem is exquisite. It shows the raw truth behind your life and I think that is very bold and brave thing to do. I enjoyed reading this and I feel very compassionate at the end. Well done.
5/5

WoW!! this was beautiful and cute n funny. my favorite part that made me smile

And although life is hard,
And mommy cant really cook.
You take away all my pain.
With a sweet, innocent look.

that is it. that part has so much to say to me. it fill me heart with a smile. im glad they make ur life living for. me i love kids. they are so cute and very hard to take care of. i love it.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy