I am so sorry for I can't help but laugh over this poem Micheal.Starting part was on the darker side, but I feel this poem should be in the humor section. This is really good.lol.Loved the way you ended the write......nice imagery.This poem isn't good.Its EXCELLENT!

Wow.. This was interesting. lol. It was filled with imagery like no other. It was probably one of the most interesting poems that I've read in my life. It was intriguing though! I love how wonderful you write. :] :] Excellent write. 5/5.

Yes, I can't help but laugh. It was very very funny, I mean yes, the way you described things were dark but I loved the ending!!
Incredible write, very creative and different!
5/5

Well i though it was great it made me luagh but i loved it..

Well...as a vegetarian...This poem sounds a bit funny... I really hate smell of sausages and grilling.. :P Please don't chuck rotten tomatoes on me because I said it.

Well...it is a lovely describtion of the situations... I could write a response to it...as a vegetarian neighbour who smells your grilling party. :D

Great job, Michael!

Lol! Was so hasty with my judgement I kinda flipped missing the hidden meaning................Yep .......But of course "This Is What I Did Over Hear".Hmmm......now am stupid or stupid?Just wanted to let ya know I do lol everytime I read this though.........no offence.And moreover i don't eat pork so!!!!

I JUST L O V E this poem!!!
youR great!!
I love you!!

I cant stop laughing) haha

I've read this before, I have no idea why I didn't comment on it. But first of all. I like the title. Very very original. And smart with the first word of each stanza, since this was a poem about eavesdropping.

"This smell is divine, a spell captivating my mouth, causing it to gush its lust. An eager impatience arrests my hunger and magnifies it, humanizing the demon inside"

This stanza had so much imagery, I could clearly see this picture you painted of this "demon inside" after all we all do have our demons that we keep locked inside. and I liked the way you portrayed it.

"Is this fair, is this right, that these banger sheaths are too pink, too raw? Too bad, you say! "

This is about the sausages right? lol

"I imagine the wieners are live pigs, lying upon this scorching bed, squealing and writhing in agony, spitting globules of swine blood from their squinty eyes."

I never thought of it in that way, when ever I cooked something. I never thought of how the actual animal would feel. I normally would think "is this going to be good" Good perspective, I doubt many other people would think of how their food would feel.

"Over and over, I hasten my actions, rotating those beasts, allowing the flames to taste their flavor, their succulent porkiness! Ultimately, I am jealous, for the flames devour what I cannot

To me this sounds like your jealous of the fact that the flames can burn away their pain, burn anything unwanted. I think that we all would like to do that. Burn everything that burdens us. that haunts us.

"..a little tap, tap on my leg? I look down at my young son. He has an empty plate and a hopeful expression.....Sausages on the barbecue, no more!"

Awww this was cute, did he get fed after all? this was a very original poem. the title caught me, I didn't think it would actually be "sausages on a barbecue" I thought that it would have a in between the lines thing. But it didnt so I would say that this was very original poetry a differet type but very good.

Whoah! speecheless, this is a very interesting poem, the imagery is so powerful attracting me within this piece. . it's kinda humorous i thinK! its a very outstanding work of art ^^,

Wow....gash...
such a nice poem,you deeply impressed me with this one,loved it (5/5)
I got one of my poem "when some one leaves for ever" on top ranking list,please read my this poem,and comment and rate it as well....corrections or criticism from your side will be apriciated.
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Love

Wow....gash...
such a nice poem,you deeply impressed me with this one,loved it (5/5)
I got one of my poem "when some one leaves for ever" on top ranking list,please read my this poem,and comment and rate it as well....corrections or criticism from your side will be apriciated.
words from your side mean alot to me.
Do rank it,Thanks
Love

This poem made me laugh. Evil yet funny. I liked how you done the words at the start of each stanza, very well done. 5/5

Very clever!
seemed very sadistic at the beginning.
well done-another great piece.
5/5 again
Aish

Brilliant writing, Michael and, as always, extremely imaginative and creative. Your words are so well used and crafted and as I've mentioned before, you always strive for the different.
I was salivating at the thought of that one last, big, juicy sausage....(I know it doesn't sound good) lol

All the best Michael and I'm glad I came across this one.

Ben

Clever and hunerous poem Michael, as all your poems are.
Made delightful reading! We've all been there at the barbeque! lol!
Save that last sausage for me! lol!
Seriously, a great write as always from you.