Comments : Under the stars

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    This poem really moved me, is all this related to you? Am so sorry you went through this. The poem is full of questions deserving answers problem is maybe there might never be one... I liked this expression, cries a lullaby of tears, its well applied. Good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well written Shellaine but very sad,a shame that children have to suffer that much

  • 16 years ago

    by real eyes realize real lies

    I really like this poem its a touching story