Reminisce

by Lonely Rider   Jun 10, 2008


Sizzling Summer heat and the sky so blue,
Teasing billows form an image resembling you,
Cool Banyan shade under which I lie,
Multicolored blossoms remind me of your smile,

The dark moonless nights and scary lonely days,
Everything surrounding, has 'You' engraved,
Waving green meadows ,the sweet flowery scent,
A part of you still remained, even after you went.

Memories of yesteryears silently flash by,
Your absence is tormenting, in solitude I cry,
A game of Destiny, Cruel story it wrote,
You watching over me from the Heaven above.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Blutonium Boy

    Thank you for the comment.

    That aside I loved this poem. I could almost feel myself being there amidst the flowery night.

    Well portrayed.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WhiskeyGirl

    This poem is amazing.
    It really hit close to home.
    Thank you for sharing this.
    Take care, and keep writing.

    Sincerly, Sammie-Lee.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WhiskeyGirl

    This poem is amazing.
    It really hit close to home.
    Thank you for sharing this.
    Take care, and keep writing.

    Sincerly, Sammie-Lee.

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    A very beautiful and amazing piece of poetry that i adored greatly. fantastic wording and brilliant description which painted a vivid picture in my mind. yeah, i have a weird mind :) .. when i got to the end, however, it felt like it wasn't quite finished. it may have ended a bit quick, but i think it was, altogether, an astounding piece. wonderful imagery.

    5/5

    Keep Writing, hun
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wonderful job, I love the use of imagery and the word "Banyan", it makes the whole poem come alive.
    ~I see a lot of potential in you, take a look at famous poets like Whitman and Frost and if you're serious about becoming published, I think you have the ability to rise above the "rhyming society of this site" and become truly great. Try the site Poet Sanctuary. :) Keep it up

Read All Comments (13)

More Poems By Lonely Rider