Will you be my wife?

by waiting 4 some1   Jun 10, 2008


When my eyes met yours I had different looks
Love becomes easy to understand just like children's books

When my eyes met yours I discovered something new
Rather than white and black there are other colors too

You colored my world, you colored my life
And now I wonder, can you be my wife?

I am one of those people who don't like to play around
I want to be your husband so how does it sound?

I am one of those people who can you give you true love
So do you accept me and be blessed from above?

We will start by two then we can be three
To have angles is your choice you are free

We will start by two then we can raise our tree
Give love and take another so do you agree?

I need you to answer as your heart already did
I still can hear it singing inside my head

Your heart says "yes" so what about you?
Am waiting for an answer am waiting for you

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  • 15 years ago

    by TheRedWomanAndherBagofLife

    Good poem, but sometimes, words are not enuf for us women (exluding unappropriate and unfaithful activities)

    ....great poems doe....

  • 16 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    Man, I assume that you made almost every girl on this site would have a husband as sweet ... Too Gud am straight lool :)).

    Amazingly written and if you got to propose using this she will probably give u 5/5 first.

  • 16 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    Ok at first i was like aww so cute. he proposed to her!! yay!(clap hands)

    but then i was crying becasue i read the last part..T_T..aww man sometimes being in love really sucks! i should know i've been there...but we have to move on...

    Your poem was simply flawless!! very well written. the emotion was clear (until the end T_T)
    No spelling errors at all. (clapping hands Xp)

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    WONDERFULL

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    WOW!! this is really so sweeeet..sadly thou

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