Comments : Demolished and Destroyed

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Such a unique write and one that compels you read over and over. Let see, from the wooden porch, to the broken window, your house has seen better days!! This a wonderful metaphor, which has been discribed beautifully!

    To me it is totally submissive, you have no energy left, no will to fight any more, no heart worth saving! So sad!

    One question, who is playing with your heart, am ex, who abused your heart, or a new love?

    Well done

    Michael