I wish you would listen to me
and let me explain why everything happens this way
Your My Sky
Your My Sun
Your My Everything That Couldn't Have Been Done
And I Just Wish That You Would Listen
Cause Everything Has A Simple Reason
Don't Walk Away
I Need You More Than Anything
I'm Crying Out Why Cant You Hear Me!
Turn It Up Wheres The Volume?
I Need Some Speakers, Can You Hear Me?
Don't Hurt Me I Just Want To Hear
That Your Still Here!
And Even Though I'd Like To Know Every Lie You've Told
I Rather Have You Back Than Lay Here Dying Old!
Your Beautiful
Your Frighting
Your Everything
Your My Lighting
And I'm Struck Down By You
Because You Said You Loved Me Too
But It Was All A Lie
I Wish You Meant It
I Guess Its Like You Said Everything Is A Trick For Life
Your My Sun
Your My Sky
Your My Everything That Couldn't Have Survived!
And I Wish You Would Just Listen
Everything Has Its Reason
Don't Look Back
We'll Fall Down!
We Can Still Keep Our Ground
Oh No My Mistake
I Wished Too Hard
On That Shooting Star!
Cause Now You Found Someone New
& Now I Cant Stop Crying
You Stupid Ass Prick Jerk
I Hate You!
Why Does Everything Have To Hurt
I'm Sure We Meant Well But Did You Have To Mix Up
Loving For Pretending
I'm Tired Of Your Shit
I'm Tired Of It!
Yet I Cant Stop Looking Back
I Want You Back
No What Is This Feeling I'm Feeling
I Cant... Stop Me Now Before I Lose Control
Before I Cross The Line And Ruin Your Life
I Cant Stop Thinking Of You
Despite All The Hate I Have For You.
Your My Sun
Your My Sky
Your My Everything That I Shall End Tonight.
This was really good
it has really good structure and the rhyming was pretty good
i really like the first stanza
it had a nice sound to it and caught my attention
i really liked the line where u said i must have wished too hard on that shooting star too
great job
4.5/5
=D