Comments : Untitled

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Great job, Sweetie....

    I know how hard it can be to handle those random memories that creep up on you.

    A couple titles I thought of were:
    -Memories of Us
    -Realization

  • 20 years ago

    by East Poetry

    I love you Amy your a great gal, thx for voting on all my poems and commenting twice on some. lol, this is a great poem, another solid piece to add to your collection.

  • 20 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I thought this poem was incredible..I have been known to be quite the title maker..how about Invisible Love?
    Timothy r

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    YES YES YES.... Invisible Love! That's it!

  • 20 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Invisable love is a great name, but im not shure it works for this peom, that title sounds like a love poem with a good enkding.. a name that i would suggest for this poem is

    Loves Dissemblance

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    I think Invisible Love is good for a couple of reasons....

    1. she couldn't see if he really cared... so if he DID in fact care, his love was invisible....

    2. if she still loves him, but realizing that it's over, she may be trying to hide her love, thus making it invisible

    But, it's up to you Amy.... pick whatever ya want :)

  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    hey that was a great poem . lol i dont have any suggestions for a title though i have enough trouble finding titles for my own.

  • 20 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    Hun i'm sorry but got no clue for a title. But it was beautiful and it wouldn't matter if it was called untitled. Its great and you're work is tons better den mine. Aight? I'll talk to ya soon. luv jess

  • 20 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    hey!!! nice poem... i'll go for invisible love... =) but it doesnt matter, u no need a title to such a very good and well written poem... ciao darling... hope u can visit mine =)

  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    Thank you all for you comments and suggestions. I really appreciate it. I still haven't had time to sit down and really think about it. I will though, thanks again! I appreciate it very much.
    Amy

  • 20 years ago

    by lokighost

    great poem amy

    5/5

    how adout (memories of my lose love for you)