Left Behind

by Meme   Jun 10, 2008


Look at all the places that you will leave behind
And tell me if one day like this love you will find

Listen to the wind as it passes through that space
And tell me if the emptiness will ever leave that place

Look into the redness of my tearing eyes
And tell me are all my feelings just a lie

Listen to my cries in the middle of the night
And tell me if you can walk away without a fight

Look at your reflection in that broken mirror
And tell me if everything is now clearer

Listen to the heart beats of my broken heart,
And tell me now is it ok for us to be apart ?

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© Copyright 2008 by: gIrL
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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    The last 2 lines are jsut amaizing , how can a broken hear beat !!?
    how his beat is difrent?
    will he ever know thsi difnrece?

    i am veryy pleased from the worsd here and the image seen ^_^ it will always stay in my mind to remmer how you expresed things ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Oh that was so sad...simple and pure bcoz it's comin directly from the heart...good job..
    Take care:)..

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    "Is there any body going to listen to my story, all about the girl that came to stay. she's the kind of girl you want that makes you sorry, still you don't regret a single day. Ah, girl."

    Girl by the beatles. thought it went well with your name and as this song is truly amazing, so is this poem. keep it. "Nice write from Poetry Knight"

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Yeah Adel is right...

    Touching poem.. keep it up..

    Best wishz... Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    This poem has hit me deep in the heart and it hurts..it reminds me of the girl that i broke her heart not long time ago...i hope she will forget me and forgive me

    your poem was deep

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