This is realy a very interesting poem
I enjoyed reading it . I especially liked the two repeat lines and the way you changed the first word each time It reminded Me of my poem ( MY SEASONED HEART)
You have a lot of tallent and I enjoy reading your works
thanks again for sharing another great poem
5/5

I love this poem....at times many girls n guys go this..some more then others....

I love this poem....at times many girls n guys go this..some more then others....