Dear Sam,

This one's a gr8 motivating poem. I am impressed and to be honest, it lights up a reader' face with smile, after reading this poem. Carry on the good work... Your poem maybe changing sompe people's lives. Rake care. Njoi.

Regards,
Bhavin

I like the message in this one...
you made some very nice points
i love the stanza
"Now on this night we must stand
United cast and crew.
We never could have come this far
Without a director quite like you"

it was quite and ending super job there!!!
5/5

This poem makes me feel gratitude for those whom sometimes go unrecognized

To tears.
through 'this pain'
don't need , in the sorrow and self doubt
said things that weren't nice
and the strife take out the comma

this was a rather funny poem i think it was cleverly put together i thought the poem was about friendship until i got to the end and the title was just a metaphor. but i liked it i have some changes though i listed them above :)