You're Just A Waste Of Space.
by Courageous Dreamer Jun 11, 2008
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You cause her to think of you too much; |
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16 years ago
Excellently written i loved it
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16 years ago
Everyone pretty much has gone through this. Where they can't get someone out of their mind as much as they would want to. So yes indeed it is a waste of space. This was a good poem. Many people will relate to this on so many levels good job!
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16 years ago
by yblehs
Gollie jeez
"For her to get you off her mind,
It's going to take a long period of time.
You're just a waste of space,
And she wants the thought of you to dissolve."
has happened a time or two hear and you deffinately captured those feeling all too well -
16 years ago
by Blissful
Oh girl I know the feeling loll. It gets so frustrating when you cannot stop thinking about somebody and they have NO idea how they make you feel inside. It kills you huh? Well dont be scared because what you're feeling is beautiful and when those butterflies are gone youll miss them so embrace it even though they may hurt sometimes. Well done hun *5/5*
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16 years ago
by Michelle18
I think this poem has a very good concept to it. for me i would like to read more. it may help the flow a little if you add more to it and make it longer.
as for being a poem i could relate to... thats one thing i liked.i know exactly what you're talking about.
overall it was pretty good.5/5
