by BrokenREALiTy Jun 11, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
[Malfunction] -- doting eyes invade transparent thoughts, |
by Sora
Well, i loved this piece of work! it was wisely written. yer a very detailed writer. and the title i can understand plus it's very eye catching! keep up the wonderful work! |
by Kaila
I really enjoyed the randomness of this poem. I usually don't post mine because, like you said I don't want all the bull critisism. But the vocabulary in this poem was so lovely it made me smile. And the simile in the first stanza was amazing! It created somewhat of a vivid picture in my head. nice job! keep it up |
Actually i liked it, it was like a dictionary however a dictionary of poetic words. Your title makes perfect sense for this poem as well. The three words you picked entwined. No its not your best, but most definately an original and i liked it. |