How do you know when you're broken?

by nobody truly knows me   Jun 11, 2008


You know that you're broken,
when every day is filled with pain.
when nothing you do is ever right,
and when your tears pour down like rain.

you know that you're broken,
when darkness overcomes the light.
when you come to fear everything,
and when you lose your will to fight.

you know that you're broken,
when you can barely make it through the day.
when you want to leave and never come back,
and when depression is here to stay.

you know that you're broken,
when your heart is torn to shreds.
when your memories haunt your mind,
and when you wish that you were dead.

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  • 12 years ago

    by panhia heart breaker

    When i read this i fell broken hearted.

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Omg.what a wonderful piece.I truely loved it,coz I really feel the same feelings.I really feel that am deeply broken.

    Excellent,really took me away.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow, very powerful and with so much emotion. I liked it a lot. 10/10

  • 16 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I loved this poem so much. I loved the repitition and the image you protrayed. This is a moving piece and i loved it. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Love is a Beautiful Thing

    Excellent very well written so true too i love 5/5