Why is the question repeating in my head
Why is the reason for these tears I shed
Why you may ask, Well, its because I'm dead
I recall the accident,its rewinding in my head
of how our car collided with the tree, and my clothes were soaked in red
of how painful screams filled the air, but theres no one around to care
Why must I die this way
Why didn't I just stay
Why did I say "OK"?
did I think it would be alright?
To drive home with a drunk at night?
he was cute I do admit,
But if I hadn't gone, then we wouldn't of crashed, and landed in this pit
Why didn't I think more, and tell him I should drive?
Why am I dieing yet he is still alive?
Why am I such a fool, because if he hadn't dived,
I wouldn't of died
Now its getting colder on this eve
Its getting harder to breath
I think its my time to leave
Why is the question repeating in my head
Why is the reason for these tears I shed
Why you may ask, well its because I'm dead
I like it, very much.. really
it was sad and catchy as well.
did this reallly happen?
i think you should get rid of the last part
you wrote asking if we like like it, cause its not about wat we like its about wat you feel and if you meant it.
so great write and thank you for the comment in my poem hun. =]