I like your poem.

I like the flow, uniqueness of style, and how you put a little bit of yourself in the words and it shows. keep up the good work!

I like this poem a lot, and I actually relate to it. Nice work.
5/5

Your frailty calls out for support, yet the fact you are able to express your pain shows that you have the strength to mend in places broken, to set out again - leaving your shelter