Comments : Start of Something New

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem has a profound begining and a seemingly romantic ending or begining which ever way the reader prefers.
    It reflects a cycle of beautiful life and death
    merging into dimentions of the bliss of rebirth
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I liked this. It was very beautiful. Again, the rhyming was great. It seems like that's what your poems mostly are. Which is good, because your poems flow sooo easy. :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    An enjoyable read, and a truism told. The first two rhymes are off a bit (but that is me). I feel the rhythm is off in the last stanza but could be helped by dropping "Patient"( I think "patience" ?)
    As always an opinion.

  • 16 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Aw anthony is a romantic. who woulda thunk? haha but seriously....good. it flows very nicely. i admire that you take so much time and thought into your poems. i just rush through them and say what's simply on my mind. i like it. noice