Going home

by im not the cause   Jun 11, 2008


Crimson drops fall
to an uncaring world
the heavens are crying
for this sad desperate girl
she tries to make them see
that shes dying inside
but for all that the people do
they might as well be blind
all they see is the dirt
her worn out clothes
they just don't care
about one of there own
so this sad desperate girl
ends up going home
her body left lying
where no one knows
while the angel she is
climbs the stair way above
she is going home
to kindness and love

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  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    This poem was touching and very relaxed,
    some can relate and the word choice beautiful.
    good poem hun. 5/5

    my vote is in for your nomination, =] good luck!

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Wow that's an awesome poem.brimming with emotion.Great!!5/5= )