Brilliant poem. saying something without actuallt saying it. the perfect words to execute your poetry. this is an outstanding poem. kind of like my poem mirror, mirror. great write. PoetryKnight, or AaronJoshua

I loved this so much it was so very well expressed!

Brilliant! very well written!

Wow this is so creatively expressed. Death is interesting on its own, but in this piece it is so eliquently dark that it is excellently penned into this piece. There is a message within a message, which should be a common thing however here it is not. I love this piece, as I think many should. The word choice in this is immaculate, the flow is stunning, the emotion is deffinately present, tone was set and continued the whole way through, I am stunned. You have created beauty in such a short piece, with only a few skills. Fantastic. Amazing. 5/5

Beautiful