by Painted Persona Jun 11, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
family
Could these limbs pleasure you? |
by Skyfire
Wow you are such a strong writer. I think the set up of this poem only adds to your voice and helps to give your words more punch. Nice job. |
by PygmyPuff
I like the sturcture, how theres an alternating stanza length. It adds depth and flow. The last line of the first stanza is obviously shorter than the rest and it takes a little something away, but the message is still amazing. |