"Sky is blue.
Grass is green.
World is singing,but I haven't seen."

^Excellent, there's a certain sincerity in this poem especially in these lines.
My tip for you is to continue writing like you do but (a lot of young poets make this mistake) keep a balance between sentences like

"I made my all life on you
Caring what you say,thinking what you do."

*With more poetic lines such as

"I carved my life as a gift for you
Caring what you say, thinking what you do.
Like a master and his dog
Resting beneath your seducing hand"

The most successful poets hardly ever rhyme (keep that in mind :)) and don't forget to edit. Keep on writing!

Wow
fanstastic, i enjoyed the poem alot.
the rhythm, the words and the flow were nice.

the meaning and the feelings were honest and true

i really loved it

"As you went on your way;you are very cheap.
Your pictures on my wall I wont keep;
I let them burn as i burn memories in my heart.
I burry my feelings,I press restart."

my favorite part

it's really strange that you got a rating of 3...you deserve 5/5

Fantastic poem.. And I really liked the part where you say "ALMOST fine" =) Great job! 5/5